Searria H.

Awww. Did her brother go to college, or something? You should use this as a way to make her join so she can post things herself. *manic laughter* Anyway. This ...

AWW. This was sweet. I thought your ryhming felt a little forced. I would almost have liked this poem more if it didn't rhyme. It was also in a very ...

Wow. This was short. You need to do at least 2 reviews before you post, and then keep a 2:1 ratio. And one-line reviews don't really count. :D This was ...

:cry: :cry: Sorry. I'm crying because I lost my dog last September to Cancer. So.. to your poem. I thought it was really good, and I could relate to it. ...

I really enjoyed this poem. I also like how firm you are with your faith. As Chirantha has already mentioned, I would cut out some of the "Fall Away"s. Maybe ...

OOO. I jumped out of the bush and jumped crazily up and down, trying to desperately make all the bugs fall off my body. While jumping, I heard someone giggle ...

Yaay! There's more! This was much less info-dumpy than the first part. Very good. I didn't find any typing errors, so that's good... You really caught me off guard by ...

I have been trying to review this all week, but school has pushed me away from doing anything fun. :? Very gripping, intriguing, and interesting start. As artistpersona has already ...

Once again, I'm not a poet, but I'll do the best I can. I liked the concept of the poem, and I liked the fact that it was free verse. ...

This was depressing, but good. The beginning two lines were good. Your rhyming pattern was consistant, but weird. The first two lines of a stanza, then the last three... I ...

I loved your comparison in this poem. I would hate to be a tight-rope walker, so I can feel your narrator's fear and uncertainty. There was only one line that ...

Very cute poem. Much more light-hearted than the previous two poems I read of yours. I agree with KookieKatie about Make-up and Ketchup. I'm not a big fan of imperfect ...

Weee! I'm on a reviewing-your-stuff rampage! I thought this was a really good poem, and it worked really well having the girl tell the story. Who exactly is Jake? Her ...

You should make a book of poems or something... This was beautiful writing. The only thing I would point out is that you use beautiful a little too much in ...

This was very good for a first poem! I've written at least fifteen, and my last one didn't come close to this! :D I think your way of separating the ...